If you’re looking to enhance the clarity and effectiveness of the instructions for adding money, you can consider the following improvements:
1.Clear Heading:
Replace “Find <Add Money> menu” with “Navigate to the <Add Money> Section.”
2. Specify Location:
Mention where the left sidebar is located to avoid confusion. For example, “Located on the left sidebar of your dashboard.”
3. Simplify Language:
Instead of “Type in the amount you want to top up,” say “Enter the desired top-up amount.”
4. Clarify Minimum Amount:
Provide additional context about the minimum amount. For example, “Please note that the minimum top-up amount is $20.”
5. Payment Button Label:
Instead of “Click <Payment> button,” say “Click the <Payment> button to proceed.”
6. Specify Third-Party Platform:
Clarify the third-party payment platform by mentioning its name. For example, “You will be redirected to the XYZ Payment Platform.”
7. Streamline Instructions:
Combine steps 3 and 4 for a smoother flow. For example, “Click <Payment> button to proceed and follow the instructions on the third-party platform to complete the top-up.”
8. Use Consistent Terminology:
Maintain consistency in terminology. For instance, if you use “top up” in one place, use it consistently throughout.
Revised Instructions:
“How to Add Money:
- Navigate to the <Add Money> section located on the left sidebar of your dashboard.
- Enter the desired top-up amount (minimum amount: $20).
- Click the <Payment> button, and you will be redirected to the XYZ Payment Platform.
- Follow the instructions on the third-party platform to complete the top-up process.”
By incorporating these changes, you can make the instructions more user-friendly and straightforward, ensuring a smoother experience for users looking to add money to their accounts.